[iri] #110: Format/wording changes for Additional Considerations (3.4.3)

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[iri] #110: Format/wording changes for Additional Considerations (3.4.3)

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#110: Format/wording changes for Additional Considerations (3.4.3)

 Because we have introduced helpful subsubsection headings, we now have a
 subsubsection that only contains two Notes. The Notes were used to
 indicate that these are additional considerations; this is now expressed
 by the subsubsection title.

 The following patch does this and also changes a 'may' to 'can'.


 {{{
 --- C:/Users/duerst/AppData/Local/Temp/draft-ietf-iri-3987bis.xml-
 revBASE.svn000.tmp.xml        木 3  1 19:10:21 2012
 +++ C:/Data/ietf-iri/draft-ietf-iri-3987bis/draft-ietf-iri-3987bis.xml  木
 3  1 20:11:07 2012
 @@ -694,8 +694,7 @@
  </section> <!-- punicode -->
    <section title="Additional Considerations">

 -<t><list style="hanging">
 -<t hangText="Note:">Domain Names may appear in parts of an IRI other
 +<t>Domain Names can appear in parts of an IRI other
  than the ireg-name part.  It is the responsibility of scheme-specific
  implementations (if the Internationalized Domain Name is part of the
  scheme syntax) or of server-side implementations (if the
 @@ -709,7 +708,7 @@
  The server-side implementation is responsible for making the
  necessary conversions to be able to retrieve the Web page.</t>

 -<t hangText="Note:">In this process, characters allowed in URI
 +<t>In this process, characters allowed in URI
  references and existing percent-encoded sequences are not encoded
 further.
  (This mapping is similar to, but different from, the encoding applied
  when arbitrary content is included in some part of a URI.)
 @@ -720,8 +719,6 @@
  <vspace/>"http://www.example.org/red%09ros%C3%A9#red", not to
  something like
  <vspace/>"http%3A%2F%2Fwww.example.org%2Fred%2509ros%C3%A9%23red".</t>
 -
 -</list></t>
  </section> <!-- additional -->
  </section> <!-- dnsmapping -->
 }}}

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 Reporter:  duerst@…  |      Owner:  draft-ietf-iri-3987bis@…
     Type:  defect    |     Status:  new
 Priority:  major     |  Milestone:
Component:  3987bis   |    Version:
 Severity:  -         |   Keywords:
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Ticket URL: <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/iri/trac/ticket/110>
iri <http://tools.ietf.org/wg/iri/>


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Re: [iri] #110: Format/wording changes for Additional Considerations (3.4.3)

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#110: Format/wording changes for Additional Considerations (3.4.3)

Changes (by duerst@…):

 * status:  new => closed
 * resolution:   => fixed


Comment:

 Implemented in revisions 157/158.

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 Reporter:  duerst@…  |       Owner:  draft-ietf-iri-3987bis@…
     Type:  defect    |      Status:  closed
 Priority:  major     |   Milestone:
Component:  3987bis   |     Version:
 Severity:  -         |  Resolution:  fixed
 Keywords:            |
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Ticket URL: <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/iri/trac/ticket/110#comment:1>
iri <http://tools.ietf.org/wg/iri/>