I tried to submit this through the online form, but the only response I got was "ERROR". I cannot tell if this means the information was submitted and the response was erroneous, or if the information was never submitted properly.
1) In the REFERENCES section:
The link to [DOMCORE] should be updated. Currently,
Web DOM Core, A. van Kesteren. W3C.
points to http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/domcore/raw-file/tip/Overview.html. When navigating to this link, you get a page stating:
The DOM specification moved to http://dom.spec.whatwg.org/.
(I noted the response is a 200 OK, not a 301 MOVED). The latter link does, it seems, point to the correct document, though I cannot tell if any specific path was intended.
2) In the STATUS OF THIS DOCUMENT section:
The 4th paragraph begins "The working groups maintains...". The number of the noun "groups" and the verb "maintains" disagree.
I appreciate the work going into the standards documents, and I know everyone wants them to be as perfect as possible.
P.S. Though I am using a company email address, I do not represent the company in any way.