I have reviewed the responses listed below. I will use the reference numbers in  to discuss my responses.
(9) Although I think adding a BP would be a good thing, I think including it as a general guideline is adequate. I do not see a commit related to this. If you
would like suggestions or review of the wording, I’d be happy to help.
(13) There is a thread with Phil Archer on the www-international@ list today about this.
(15) I have made suggestions regarding a wording change at 
(16) I don’t see the resolution to this?
Other than the above comments, I am satisfied for all of the other items that I raised. Please note that this does not extend to Felix Sasaki’s comments.
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